​Compose an essay:Some people think that online shops will eventually replace entity shops (offline shops). What is your opinion? Write a 300-word argumentative essay stating your views.
​Compose an essay:Some people think that online shops will eventually replace entity shops (offline shops). What is your opinion? Write a 300-word argumentative essay stating your views.
【正确答案】:

      NOWADAYS, THERE ARE MORE AND MORE PEOPLE SHOPPING ONLINE. IF YOU ASK TEN PEOPLE WHETHER THEY SHOP ONLINE, NINE PEOPLE WILL TELL YOU 'YES'. ALTHOUGH ONLINE SHOPPING IS POPULAR, THERE ARE STILL SOME DIFFERENT VIEWS. ANYWAY, ONLINE SHOPS WILL NOT REPLACE ENTITY SHOPS IN THE NEAR FUTURE.

      ON THE ONE HAND, ONLINE SHOPPING HAS MANY ADVANTAGES. THE FIRST ONE IS THAT IT'S VERY CONVENIENT FOR YOU TO BUY THINGS . THAT'S TO SAY, YOU JUST NEED TO SPEND FEW MINUTES LOOKING FOR YOUR PRE FENCE AND CLICKING THE BUTTONS AND THEN WAIT FOR ITS COMING. ALL THE PROCESS ONLY NEEDS A LITTLE TIME AND YOU EVEN DON'T NEED TO MOVE YOUR LEGS! THE SECOND ONE IS THAT YOU CAN COMPARE THE PRICES WHICH ARE DIFFERENT IN VARIOUS SHOPS SO AS TO FIND OUT THE MOST CHEAP AS WELL AS THE BEST ONES. BESIDES, LAST BUT NOT LEAST, ONLINE SHOPPING PROVIDES A WAY FOR THOSE WHO LIVE IN REMOTE PLACES AND HAVE DIFFICULTY GOING TO SHOPPING.

      ON THE OTHER HAND, ONLINE SHOPPING ALSO HAS SOME DISADVANTAGES. FIRSTLY, THERE ARE MANY WRONG ADVERTISEMENTS ON THE INTERNET AND CLIENTS ARE OFTEN CHEATED AND LOSE LOTS OF MONEY. WHAT'S MORE, THE INTERNET IS VISUAL AND WE CAN ONLY SEE THE GOODS RATHER THAN TOUCHING THEM, WHICH LETS US HAVE FALSE VIEWS AND THEN MAKE WRONG DECISIONS . MOREOVER, MOST GOODS THAT ARE SHOWN ON THE INTERNET ARE DIFFERENT FROM THE TRUE THINGS, WHICH MAKES SOME CUSTOMERS UNSATISFIED WHEN THEY RECEIVE THE GOODS. BESIDES, IN THE ENTITY STORE, PEOPLE CAN COMMUNICATE WITH THE SALESPERSON FACE TO FACE WITHOUT ANY INTERFERENCE, WHICH IS NOT AVAILABLE IN ONLINE SHOP. THEREFORE, MANY PEOPLE TEND TO BUY THINGS IN ENTITY STORES WHICH CAN SECURE THEIR SATISFACTION.

      AS FAR AS I AM CONCERNED, WHATEVER THE THING IS, WE SHOULD SEE THE INTERNET IN DIFFERENT PERSPECTIVES. ALTHOUGH THERE ARE MANY DANGERS ON THE INTERNET, ONLINE SHOPPING HAS WIDE HOME MARKETS. AS LONG AS WE USE IT PROPERLY, IT CAN BENEFIT OUR LIVES! HOWEVER, THE ONLINE SHOP CAN NOT REPLACE THE ENTITY SHOP FOR THE TIME BEING. BECAUSE, THERE IS STILL A LONG WAY TO GO FOR ALL THE GENERATIONS TO ACCEPT THE NEW SHOPPING BEHAVIOUR. 


【题目解析】:由题干可知本文是一篇对比议论类的文章,作文思路如下: 开头段:提出主题 Although online shopping is popular, there are still some different views. 主体段:论证主题 ①on one hand,____________________________(分论点一)+举例子 ②On the other hand, ____________________________(分论点二)+举例子 ③As far as I am concerned, _______________________________(分论点三)+举例子 结尾段:自己的观点,总结升华。
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