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 COMMENT ON PARENTS’ OVERPROTECTION OF CHILDREN 
          IN RECENT YEARS, THE PHENOMENON THAT MANY PARENTS CHOOSE TO ESCORT THEIR CHILDREN TO COLLEGES HAS TRIGGERED A HOT DISCUSSION AMONG PUBLIC. IF THIS TREND CONTINUES TO DEVELOP WITHOUT CURBS, IT MAY LEAD TO MANY UNEXPECTED CONSEQUENCES. THEREFORE, SEEKING THE CAUSES OF IT AND FINDING OUT THE SOLUTIONS SHOULD BE OUR TOP CONCERN.
        DOZENS OF REASONS MAY EXPLAIN THE EMERGENCE OF THE PHENOMENON, AND I WILL EXPLORE THE MOST OBVIOUS ONES HERE. FIRST OF ALL, MOST OF CHINESE FAMILIES HAVE ONLY ONE CHILD, WHICH LEADS TO THE FACT THAT THE CHILD BECOMES THE APPLE IN THEIR PARENTS’ EYES. PARENTS TEND TO PROTECT THEIR CHILDREN ALL THE TIME, IGNORING THE FACT THAT THEIR CHILDREN HAVE ALREADY BECOME GROWN-UPS. SECONDLY, BEING ACCUSTOMED TO THE PROTECTION FROM PARENTS, MOST CHILDREN ARE AFRAID OF OR INCAPABLE OF DOING THINGS INDEPENDENTLY, WHICH MAY ALSO EXPLAIN THE POPULARITY OF THIS PHENOMENON. LAST BUT NOT LEAST, PARENTS ESCORTING THEIR CHILDREN TO COLLEGE IS CLOSELY RELATED TO THE SOCIAL ENVIRONMENT OF CHINA WHERE CHILDREN ARE LESS MATURE THAN THEIR EUROPEAN COUNTERPARTS EVEN WHEN THEY REACH THE AGE OF EIGHTEEN.
        THERE ARE SOME ADVICE AS FOLLOWS WHICH CAN BE GIVEN TO THE PARENTS AND CHILDREN TO IMPROVE THE SITUATION. ON THE ONE HAND, PARENTS SHOULD CHANGE THEIR PARENTING STYLES, ADMITTING THE FACT THAT THEIR CHILDREN WILL BE MATURE ONE DAY AND NEED TO ACHIEVE THE INDEPENDENCE. ON THE OTHER HAND, CHILDREN SHOULD KEEP ONE THING IN MIND THAT THE PATH OF GROWTH IS FULL OF CHALLENGES AND THE CHALLENGES WILL MAKE YOU STRONGER. OVERCOME THEM INDEPENDENTLY AND YOU WILL BENEFIT A LOT FROM IT. THE WORLD WILL BE A BETTER PLACE IF WE MAKE JOINT EFFORTS TO PUT AN END TO THE SITUATION.
【题目解析】：现象分析类文章开头，主体，结尾段的例句如下：开头段：提出主题①In recent years, the question of _____________ has aroused extensive concern / has triggered a hot discussion among public.近些年来，…的问题引起了公众的广泛关注/热烈讨论。 ② If this trend continues to develop without curbs, it may lead to many unexpected consequences. 如果任由这一趋势继续发展，可能会导致一些意想不到的结果。 ③Therefore, seeking the cause of it and finding out the solutions should be our top concern. 因此，找到导致这一现象的原因和解决措施使我们首要关心的。 主体段：论证主题 ① There are numerous causes of this trend and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here. ②First of all, ( 句子 ), which leads to the ( 名词 / the fact + that + 句子). 首先，…… 导致了（ ） 现象，（ ）的事实：（一句话）。 ③ Secondly, ( 名词 ) may also explain the popularity of this phenomenon. 其次，（ ）也可以解释这种现象为什么这么流行。 ④ Last but not least , ( 现象 ) is closely related to ( 名词 ). 最后也是最重要的， …与（ ）也是有关的。 结尾段：重申主题／对策措施 ① There are some measures as follows which can be taken to improve the situation. 可以采取一些措施来改善这一情况。 ② On the one hand, ③ On the other hand, ④ The world will be a better place if we make joint efforts to put an end to (该现象).