【正确答案】:
WHO HAVE HIGHER VALUE: STARS OR PROFESSIONALS?
        ①NOWADAYS, ATHLETES AND MOVIE STARS IN SOME SOCIETY MAKE MORE MONEY MORE QUICKLY THAN PROFESSIONALS SUCH AS DOCTORS, NURSES AND SCHOOL TEACHERS. THOUGH THIS SEEMS NO FAIR TOMANY PEOPLE, THERE ARE GOOD REASONS FOR SUCH PHENOMENON. BY LAWS OF MARKET, THE HIGHER DEMAND FOR CERTAIN GOODS OR SERVICE, THE HIGHER VALUE SUCH GOODS OR SERVICES WOULD HAVE. MOVIE STARS OF FAMOUS ATHLETES ENTERTAIN A NATION OR EVEN THE WHOLE WORLD. THEY SATISFY THE NEEDS OF VERY LARGE POPULATIONS WITH GREATER EFFICIENCY THAN MEDICAL PROFESSIONALS OR TEACHERS, WHO USUALLY WORK FOR ONE HOSPITAL OR SCHOOL. AS A RESULT, STARS ARE ABLE TO CREATE GREATER VALUE FOR THEIR EMPOLYEES AND DESERVE HIGHER INCOME.
       ② HOWEVER, I THINK THAT THE REAL VALUE OF MANY STARS IS SUPERFICIAL.  UNLIKE OTHER PROFESSIONALS, STARS ARE MADE TO CATER THE CONSTANTLY CHANGING POP CULTURE. NO MATTER HOW POPULAR THEY ARE NOW, THE STARS WOULD BE FORGOTTEN AS TIME GOES BY. PROFESSIONALS LIKE DOCTORS AND TEACHERS CREATE THE TRUE VALUE FOR THEIR SOCIETY. THEIR EXPERIENCE AND KNOWLEDGE DRIVE OUR SOCIETY FORWARD. BY CONTRAST, STARS CREATE DEMAND AND MAKE THEIR FORTUNE MAINLY BY MAKING NEWS TO ATTRACT ATTENTION.
        ③DUE TO THE POWERFUL INFLUENCES OF SHOW BUSINESS, MANY YOUNG PEOPLE ARE MORE INTERESTED IN GETTING FAMOUS AND RICH OVERNIGHT THAN WORKING HARD IN MORE WORTHY PROFESSIONS. SUCH IDEAS AND ACTION WOULD MAKE YOUNG PEOPLE, THROW AWAY THEIR AMBITION TO BECOME GOOD DOCTORS OR LAWYERS.
       ④TO CONCLUDE, THE VALUE OF STARS IS MORE SUPERFICIAL AND DOES NOT FORM THE REAL VALUE OF A SOCIETY. THE TRUE VALUE OF OUR WORLD IS CREATED BY PEOPLE WITH REAL KNOWLEDGEAND SKILLS LIKE DOCTORS AND TEACHERS. WE SHOULD NOT ENCOURAGE YOUNG PEOPLE TO WASTE TIME AND MONEY BEING STARS INSTEAD OF WORKING HARD TO BE SOMEONE MORE USEFUL TO THEIR SOCIETY. 
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