WRITING

Write a composition in about 150 words, basing yourself on one of the texts you have learned.
TOPIC: What three qualities do you most expect in a friend? The text you should base your composition on is On Friendship

WRITING

Write a composition in about 150 words, basing yourself on one of the texts you have learned.
TOPIC: What three qualities do you most expect in a friend? The text you should base your composition on is On Friendship. Use the following outline as a guide:  

1) Introduction (you name the three qualities)

2) Body (you develop what you have mentioned in the introduction)
3) Conclusion (you summarize what you have written)


【正确答案】:

     THE QUALITIES I EXPECT MOST IN FRIENDS ARE LOYALTY, HONESTY AND READINESS TO HELP.
     LOYALTY MEANS THAT THEY TRUST ME AND DON'T DESERT ME WHEN I AM IN TROUBLE. THEY SHARE WITH ME NOT ONLY JOYS AND HOPES, BUT ALSO SORROWS AND FEARS. ALSO, I THINK FRIENDSHIP REQUIRES HONESTY. I WANT MY FRIENDS TO BE SINCERE AND FRANK WITH ME. I HOPE THEY DON'T HESITATE TO POINT OUT MY SHORTCOMINGS AND NEVER TRY TO COVER UP MY ERRORS. INSTEAD, I WANT THEM TO HELP ME IMPROVE. FINALLY, I THINK TRUE FRIENDS ARE PEOPLE I CAN TURN TO IN TIMES OF DIFFICULTY, AS THE SAYING GOES, "A FRIEND IN NEED IS A FRIEND INDEED." 


【题目解析】:

建议从三种品质展开进行论述,并进行总结。     

     我最期待朋友拥有的品质是忠诚、诚实和乐于助人。
     忠诚意味着他们信任我,在我有困难时不抛弃我。他们不仅和我分享快乐和希望,也和我分享悲伤和恐惧。另外,我认为友谊需要诚实。我希望我的朋友对我真诚坦率。我希望他们毫不犹豫地指出我的缺点,永远不要试图掩盖我的错误。相反,我希望他们帮助我提高。最后,我认为真正的朋友是在困难时期我可以求助的人,正如一句俗话说的一样:“患难见真情。”


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