TOPIC: Compare the differences between Russell and his sister Doris when they were children. Base your composition on Selling the Post.
TOPIC: Compare the differences between Russell and his sister Doris when they were children. Base your composition on Selling the Post.
【正确答案】:Russell and Doris were quite different when they were children. Though she was two years younger, Doris did more housework. She washed the dishes, made beds, and cleaned the house. Russell was quite inactive, and did not do these things unless his mother told him to.
Also Doris seemed to have more“gumption”. When Russell was eight, he began to sell a magazine after school. But often he just stood at the roadside waiting for people to come over to him. Doris proved to be much better at the job. One rainy night when Russell returned home without selling a single copy, Doris went back with him.She would stride to a car as soon as it stopped at the red light and knocked at the closed window. When it opened she would thrust a copy at the driver. In this way she soon sold all the copies. (148 words)
【评分参考】
优秀(13-15分)
(1)内容涵盖参考答案中所提及的要点。
(2)语言通顺,无重大语法结构错误,用词恰当,允许有少量拼写错误。
良好(11—12分)
(1)内容涵盖参考答案中所提及的主要内容,但不够清楚,或不够透彻
(2)语言较通顺,可有1个重大语法错误,用词较为恰当,不得超过5个拼写错误
及格(9-10分)
(1)内容基本都能点到,但比较粗浅。
(2)语言尚可,基本能表达思想,但错误较多。
不及格
字数不够,语言质量较差,但尚能表达一些思想。
字数不够,涉及到一些内容,但语言质量较差,表达不清楚。
白卷或文不对题。
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