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TO SPEND OUR HOLIDAY OUTSIDE OUR HOUSE 
        IN RECENT YEARS, WE ARE BOMBARDED BY THE MAGAZINES AND WEBSITES WITH THE TOPIC ABOUT WHAT WE CAN DO IN OUR SPARE TIME. THE ATTITUDES TOWARDS WHETHER WE SHOULD STAY AT HOME OR WHETHER WE SHOULD GO OUT FOR FUN VARY FROM PERSON TO PERSON. SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT STAYING AT HOME IS A BETTER CHOICE WHILE OTHERS HOLD THAT STEPPING OUT OF YOUR ROOM TO TASTE THE FUN OF HOLIDAY IS A WISER CHOICE. AS FAR AS I AM CONCERNED, I HAVE A PREFERENCE FOR THE SECOND OPINION BECAUSE SPARE TIME IS INDEED PRECIOUS, IT IS QUITE ADVISABLE TO SPEND THE SPARE TIME OUTSIDE RATHER THAN IDLE THE TIME AWAY AT HOME.
        AMONG VARIOUS REASONS WHICH MAKE ME THINK GOING OUT IS A BETTER IDEA TO SPEND THE SPARE TIME, THERE ARE THREE CONSPICUOUS ASPECTS AS FOLLOWS. FIRST AND FOREMOST, GOING OUT IN YOUR SPARE TIME CAN BE A GOOD RELAXATION FOR THOSE PEOPLE WHO LEAD A FAST-PACED LIFE IN THE URBAN AREAS. A GOOD CASE IN POINT IS THAT MOST OF PEOPLE LIVE A STRESSFUL LIFE DURING THE WORK DAYS, WHICH MAY EASILY EXPLAIN WHY THEY WANT TO GET AWAY FROM THE CITY WHERE THEY WORK DURING THEIR SPARE TIME OR HOLIDAYS. WHAT IS MORE, NO ONE COULD NEGLECT THE FACT THAT GOING OUT CAN PROVIDE YOU WITH INFINITE POSSIBILITIES WHICH CANNOT BE OFFERED WHEN YOU ARE AT HOME. TO ENRICH YOUR LIFE EXPERIENCES SUCH AS MEETING DIFFERENT PEOPLE, EXCHANGING DIFFERENT IDEAS AND EXPERIENCING DIFFERENT CUSTOMS IS OFTEN CITED AS AN EXAMPLE. ANOTHER POINT WHICH CANNOT BE OVERLOOKED IS THAT GOING OUT INSTEAD OF STAYING AT HOME MAY MAKE YOUR HOLIDAY MORE UNFORGETTABLE. TO LEAVE SOME SPECIAL MEMORIES ABOUT THE HAPPY TRIPS OR TO LEAVE A MARK IN YOUR MUNDANE LIFE BY TRAVELLING ALONE IS WORTHY OF KEEPING IN MIND.
        FOR THE REASONS PRESENTED ABOVE, I STRONGLY COMMIT TO THE NOTION THAT SPENDING YOUR SPARE TIME OUTSIDE OF YOUR HOME IS BETTER THAN STAYING AT HOME TO IDLE THE TIME AWAY. LIFE IS BUT A SPAN. TO GO OUT AND EXPLORE SOMETHING NEW MAY MAKE OUR SHORT LIFE MORE COLORFUL AND MEANINGFUL.
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