The following passage is incomplete with one paragraph missing. Study the following passage carefully and write a conclusion of about 100 words on“Buying a Car or Going on a Vacation?”. Make sure that the tone and vocabulary you use are in unity w
The following passage is incomplete with one paragraph missing. Study the following passage carefully and write a conclusion of about 100 words on“Buying a Car or Going on a Vacation?”. Make sure that the tone and vocabulary you use are in unity with the passage provided.
Buying a Car or Going on a Vacation?
Trying to decide how to use your money is always tough. Should you use your money to buy a car or go on a vacation? Since both of them can provide pleasure, it always makes it difficult for you to make a sensible decision. The pleasure you get from driving a car is always unforgettable. Every time you drive a car, it gives the pleasure of not having to depend on public transportation. Therefore, you can go to places where public transportation doesn't reach. Moreover, driving a car can also shorten the distance you are traveling and save your time, thus making your life easier and more enjoyable. With a car, your life can be more interesting and convenient. A vacation gives you the opportunity to learn new things and meet new and interesting people. From a vacation you get the pleasure of doing wonderful things and of totally relaxing and enjoying yourself. The memories you bring home with you can give you the same pleasure again every time you think of them.
【正确答案】:

     ALL IN ALL, WHETHER WE BUY A CAR OR TRAVEL, WE CAN DERIVE HAPPINESS FROM IT. BUYING A CAR CAN MAKE OUR LIFE EASIER, WHILE TRAVELING CAN MAKE US MEET INTERESTING PEOPLE AND THINGS, AND RELAX. FROM MY POINT OF VIEW, I WOULD CHOOSE TO BUY A CAR. NOT ONLY CAN WE ENJOY THE FUN OF DRIVING, OUR LIFE WILL BE MORE INTERESTING AND CONVENIENT. BESIDES, CARS CAN HELP US SAVE MORE MONEY ON TRAFFIC AND SET ASIDE MORE MONEY FOR TRAVELING. THE MOST IMPORTANT THING IN LIFE IS TO BE HAPPY. NO MATTER WHAT WE CHOOSE, I HOPE OUR BODY AND MIND WILL ALWAYS BE ON THE ROAD.


【题目解析】:根据第一段可知本篇文章是一篇议论文,讨论是买车还是度假。根据第一段可以列出全文的提纲: I Should you use your money to buy a car or go on a vacation?II The advantage of buying a car.III The advantage of taking a vacationIVConslusion由提纲可知,最后一段是对全文的总结。因此缺失的一段可以根据文章的前四段进行总结,并说明自己的观点。 All in all, whether we buy a car or travel, we can derive happiness from it. Buying a car can make our life easier, while traveling can make us meet interesting people and things, and relax. From my point of view, I would choose to buy a car. Not only can we enjoy the fun of driving, our life will be more interesting and convenient. Besides, cars can help us save more money on traffic and set aside more money for traveling. The most important thing in life is to be happy. No matter what we choose, I hope our body and mind will always be on the road. 总而言之,无论我们买车还是旅行,我们都能从中得到快乐。买一辆车可以让我们的生活更轻松,而旅行可以使我们遇到有趣的人和事,并放松身心。如果是我的话我会选择买一辆车。我们不仅可以享受驾驶乐趣,我们的生活还会更加有趣和方便。此外,汽车可以帮助我们节省更多的交通费用,留出更多的钱用于旅游。人生最重要的事是快乐。不管我们选择什么,我希望我们的身心永远在路上。
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