A role model is someone who inspires us in our life and makes us want to be better .Write a 300-word expository essay about the qualities of your role model.
【正确答案】：【参考答案】<>My Role ModelAlmost everyone has a role model in their life. They could be a parent, a friend, a teacher, a sports hero, or a fictional character. They could be the dear mentors who supervise your academic life. He could be someone you read about in a book.A role model is hard to define, because it can be different for everyone. Often, it is someone you would like to be like when you get older, or someone who does something you find hard to do.My role model is somebody who is trying to stop violence and make peace in the world. My model is Officer Li. Officer Li is a police officer and is very nice and caring. His favorite way of solving things is to negotiate it and put the safety of other people before his own. Although Officer Li has a gun and points it at people he only does that to scare them so they won’t cause any harm to innocent people. But, he has never had to shoot anyone in his life and never intends to.The reason he is my model is because he stops a lot of bad things and helps people with problems they might have. He helps find the reason why they want to hurt people and teaches them why it’s bad. He helps them become a better person so they are happy with their life.I think all policemen do a very good job, but I think Officer Li should get extra credit for doing more work and he is not interested in being rewarded for his actions. When he helps a lot of people get out of trouble and evil, he always says “It’s my duty”. Once I told him that he is my hero just like superman, he smiled and replied that “People call us heroes, but we were just doing our job. So when you do a good job yourself, you are a hero too. A hero now lies in you.”Officer Heck is my model and my hero and I’m sure that I’m not the only one. I see my model every Friday in my school program. He is a very good officer for students. Sometimes he sets up little acts and shows every student what to do in all different kinds of situations. If there is an award for role models, he should be the one who wins! When I grow up, I want to be a policeman just like him!评分标准：A—— 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。B—— 切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。C—— 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。D—— 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。E—— 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。（注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词儿无法表达思想，则给0分）
