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Correct or improve the translation of the following Chinese sentences.原文：一个人的工作，究竟是三分成绩七分错误，还是七分成绩三分错误， 必须有个根本的估价。译文：We must have a fundamental evaluation of a person's work and establish whether his achievements amount to 30 percent and his mistakes to 70 percent, or whether his achievements amount to 70 percent and his mistakes to 30 percent.改译：
【正确答案】：

WE MUST HAVE A FUNDAMENTAL EVALUATION OF A PERSON'S WORK AND ESTABLISH WHETHER HIS ACHIEVEMENTS AMOUNT TO 30 PERCENT AND HIS MISTAKES TO 70 PERCENT, OR VICE VERSA.

【题目解析】：原译文重复出现相同的内容，不够简练。汉语不怕重复，英语怕重复，常用代词代替重复的内容或将其省略。vice versa意为“反之亦然”。