【正确答案】:
OVER THE PAST TWENTY YEARS, WE HAVE WON VICTORIES IN AERONAUTICS ONE AFTER ANOTHER.
【题目解析】:原译文的主语使用错误。汉语的拟人化程度较高,拟人化在汉语中较常见。而在英语中,此类表达往往被视为修辞上的语病。根据英文的表达习惯,原句的拟人手法在翻译成英语后不能保留,解决的办法是恢复原句中隐含的主语 (we),重新选择动词搭配(won victories)。
OVER THE PAST TWENTY YEARS, WE HAVE WON VICTORIES IN AERONAUTICS ONE AFTER ANOTHER.