Correct or improve the translation of the following Chinese sentences.原文：二十年来，我国的航天事业从胜利走向新的胜利。 译文：In the past twenty years, our aeronautics cause has won victories one after another.改译：
Correct or improve the translation of the following Chinese sentences.原文：二十年来，我国的航天事业从胜利走向新的胜利。 译文：In the past twenty years, our aeronautics cause has won victories one after another.改译：
【正确答案】：

OVER THE PAST TWENTY YEARS, WE HAVE WON VICTORIES IN AERONAUTICS ONE AFTER ANOTHER.


【题目解析】：原译文的主语使用错误。汉语的拟人化程度较高，拟人化在汉语中较常见。而在英语中，此类表达往往被视为修辞上的语病。根据英文的表达习惯，原句的拟人手法在翻译成英语后不能保留，解决的办法是恢复原句中隐含的主语 (we)，重新选择动词搭配（won victories）。
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