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Compose an essay.Nowadays, many old buildings are being replaced by new constructions. Some people think that they should be knocked down to make way for the new ones. Others think that they should be preserved, for they are part of our history. What is your opinion? Write a 300-Word expository essay stating your views.
【正确答案】：

     WITH THE ACCELERATION OF URBANIZATION, MORE AND MORE OLD BUILDINGS HAVE BEEN DEMOLISHED AND BUILT INTO HIGH-RISE BUILDINGS. TOWERING BUILDINGS ROSE UP ONE BY ONE, WHILE LOW-RISE HOUSES WITH RICH CULTURAL HERITAGE WERE SACRIFICED. THIS PHENOMENON HAS AROUSED MY DEEP THOUGHT. ANCIENT BUILDINGS CAN NOT BE PULLED DOWN NO MATTER WHAT HAPPENED.
     FIRST OF ALL, THE OLD BUILDINGS REPRESENT CHINA'S TRADITIONAL CRAFTS AND ARE THE PAINSTAKING EFFORTS AND CRYSTALLIZATION OF CHINA'S TRADITIONAL CRAFTSMEN. THE CARVED BEAMS, PAINTED BUILDINGS AND EXQUISITE ARCHITECTURAL TECHNIQUES IN ANCIENT BUILDINGS CANNOT BE REPLACED BY MODERN HIGH-TECH. THEREFORE, TEARING DOWN THESE OLD BUILDINGS IS EQUIVALENT TO TEARING DOWN THE TRADITIONAL CHINESE CRAFTS.
     SECONDLY, MANY OLD BUILDINGS CONTAIN RICH CULTURAL CONNOTATIONS. MANY HISTORICAL AND CULTURAL BUILDINGS CAN REFLECT OUR LOVE FOR OUR COUNTRY AND SHOW THE CONFIDENCE OF THE CHINESE NATION.
     IN ADDITION, FOR OLD BUILDINGS, OUR ATTITUDE SHOULD BE TO PROTECT AND DEVELOP, NOT DISMANTLE. WE CAN MAINTAIN AND REPAIR THOSE BUILDINGS THAT HAVE BEEN SERIOUSLY DAMAGED. THE DEVELOPMENT AND UTILIZATION OF OLD BUILDINGS THAT ARE RELATIVELY INTACT AND CAN CONTINUE TO BE USED AND THE DEVELOPMENT OF TOURISM CAN NOT ONLY CREATE ECONOMIC BENEFITS BUT ALSO CARRY FORWARD CHINA'S TRADITIONAL CULTURE.
     HOWEVER, THE ACCELERATION OF URBANIZATION HAS LED SOME LOCAL GOVERNMENTS TO BLINDLY DEMOLISH OLD BUILDINGS TO BUILD HIGH-RISE BUILDINGS, CAUSING DAMAGE TO MANY TRADITIONAL BUILDINGS. THIS REQUIRES OUR GOVERNMENT DEPARTMENTS TO STRENGTHEN THE AWARENESS OF CULTURAL PROTECTION, INCREASE THE PROTECTION OF TRADITIONAL BUILDINGS AND CULTURE, AND PROTECT AND DEVELOP OLD BUILDINGS INSTEAD OF DEMOLISHING THEM.

【题目解析】：现象分析类文章开头，主体，结尾段的例句如下：开头段：提出主题 ①With the acceleration of urbanization, _____________ This phenomenon has aroused my deep thought. 随着城市化进程的加快，…的现象引起了我们的深思。 ②From my point of view,_____________ 提出自己的看法。主体段：论证主题 ①First of all, the old buildings represent _____________首先，这些旧建筑代表了_____________②Secondly, many old buildings contain rich cultural connotations.其次，这些旧建筑蕴含着丰富的文化底蕴。③ In addition, for old buildings, our attitude should be _____________.另外，对于旧建筑，我们的态度应该是____________.结尾段：重申主题／对策措施 This requires our government departments ____________.