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Correct or improve the translation of the following Chinese sentences.原文：他送来的稿子，我不能仔细全部欣赏完，但我却充分感觉到了他的文章的魅力。 译文：He had sent me his articles, I was unable to read carefully and enjoy them all, I was fully aware of the charm of his writings.改译：
【正确答案】：

I WAS UNABLE TO READ CAREFULLY AND ENJOY ALL THE ARTICLES/THE WHOLE WORK HE HAD SENT ME, BUT I WAS FULLY AWARE OF THE CHARM OF HIS WRITINGS.

【题目解析】：原译文没有处理好句子结构，分句间缺少连接词。根据汉英句子结构的不同特点，把原句中的两个并列句译成英文的一个包含定语从句的长句来处理，使句子更加连贯。