原文:北京奥委会与全市人民一道,加快实施北京市的环保规划。 译文:The Beijing Olympic Committee and all Beijingers aim to further speed up her environmental protection plans.改译:
Translation Revision
B. Correct or improve the translation of the following Chinese sentences
Example:
原文:能为他的这本散文子集作序,我觉得很荣幸。
译文:To write a preface to this collection of his essays gives me a great honor.
改译:I find it a great honor to write a preface to this collection of his essays. 


原文:北京奥委会与全市人民一道,加快实施北京市的环保规划。 译文:The Beijing Olympic Committee and all Beijingers aim to further speed up her environmental protection plans.改译:
【正确答案】:

TOGETHER WITH ALL BEIJINGERS, THE BEIJING OLYMPIC COMMITTEE AIMS TO FURTHER SPEED UP HER ENVIRONMENTAL PROTECTION PLANS. 


【题目解析】:本题考查单句译文改译——语序的调整。“与全市人民一道”的翻译, 在进行翻译时,要先确定句子的框架。根据原文,我们确定译文的主语是北京奥委会,与全市人民一道可以处理成伴随状语。用词组together with来表示。所以确定译文为:Together with all Beijingers, the Beijing Olympic Committee aims to further speed up her environmental protection plans.
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