原文：（中国）传统节日渐行渐远，西方节日大行其道。 译文：Traditional Chinese festivals are gradually receding from us, Western festivals are becoming more and more popular.
【正确答案】：改译：Traditional Chinese festivals are gradually receding from us while Western festivals are becoming more and more popular.
【题目解析】：原句是一个对比句式，对比中国传统节日和西方节日。所以我们用连词while（而）将两个句子连接在一起，表示对比和转折。
