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Correct or improve the translation of the following Chinese sentences.原文：总之，一个合逻辑，一个合文法，一个较好的修辞，这三点请你们在写文章的时候注意。 译文：In short, to be logical, to be grammatical and to have a better command of rhetoric, these are the three points I would like you to bear in mind when you write.改译：
【正确答案】：

IN SHORT, TO BE/BEING LOGICAL, TO BE/BEING GRAMMATICAL AND TO HAVE /HAVING A BETTER COMMAND OF RHETORIC ARE THE THREE POINTS I WOULD LIKE YOU TO BEAR IN MIND WHEN YOU WRITE.

【题目解析】：并列句的并列成分中不定式和分词短语形式要保持一致。如都以不定式开头，则都用不定式形式；如都以分词短语开头，则都用分词短语形式。